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Here are 3 practice commercial scripts I recorded as homework for my coach. I’d appreciate any feedback/tips. Thanks!
AMERICAN TIRE SUPPLY
Free. Now when’s the last time ya’ heard that? A while…right? Well at American Tire Supply, when you buy one all-weather radial tire, you get another one free! Plus, get a free alignment! Hey, with a deal like this, how can you NOT afford to visit. So hurry on down to your local American Tire Supply, where you can still hear the word free. Subject to dealer participation.
Have you ever noticed what happens when you put in a movie?
You just stick it in,
Hit play, and…
The rest of the world just disappears.
Suddenly, it’s just you and your family.
You remember them. Your family. Some of them look like you.
At Movie Gallery, we have thousands of great movies. Including your favorite holiday movies plus the latest releases. And every one of them is guaranteed to have the same magical powers.
A 1 STEAK SAUCE
With steak, you want to make every bite count. That’s why we use A-1 Steak Sauce. A-1 brings out every single bite of steak, or even hamburger. Mmmmm, delicious. For me, there’s only one steak sauce, A-1. Because A-1 has all the taste that makes every bite count