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Tiffany Desrosiers
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Hi Toque!

Great voice & good read! I would recommend working on your tone when reading it. Like, give us a bit of a playful sarcasm when telling us “it’s great news for the canary” and “your canary will thank you for it”.

I did like how you hit “Purina One” letting us know like “haha we’re laughing… Now go buy the product!” 🙂