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Hi Docr15, good work! I like this read for you, sounds warm and relaxed with good pacing throughout. I think too that emphasizing “Happy Thanksgrilling” could make the script have a little more humor in it at the end, like you are inventing a new holiday by grilling in the summer or something and you are cracking yourself up about taking about it, just a small suggestion. Very good read!

Mary