[kevinwiland]

Steve, this is really awesome. You have a very natural and friendly voice for this genre. I am impressed.

My only feedback is “but not too formal because that’s just not our style” starting at 0:09. It seems choppy with breaks between each word. I think smoothing it out would sound more relaxed and consistent with the rest of your performance. Keep in mind, I am a beginner VO actor, and this is just my impression.

Very nice job!