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Mitch_CrawfordMitch_Crawford
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Loved the first sentence! Agree that the “a glow” was a bit staccato, and I wonder what the end would sound like if the product name was emphasized as “truly glowing skin” care, as opposed to “truly glowing” skin care. Does that make sense? I believe this is a perfect ad for your voice, to be sure!