Edge Studio has been producing high-quality audio and educating students in the art of VO for over thirty years. We are committed to providing the highest standard of production and education to our clients and students around the world.
Hi Mary…couple of notes from the first listen:
– it feels “read” as opposed to feeling natural. How are you connecting this to the listener? Who do you envision that you are speaking to? This will help with getting out of the “read” zone and into the conversational zone that most clients are looking for right now
– the “b” in “believe” is really lost…not sure if that’s just from the recording, or the enunciation
– The penultimate sentence is really rushed, especially in comparison with the rest of the read (I do this sometimes as well)
– There’s a glottal stop after “that’s” in the tag…try to keep the phrase moving without that pause there
Edge Studio has been producing high-quality audio and educating students in the art of VO for over thirty years. We are committed to providing the highest standard of production and education to our clients and students around the world.
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