[kfvoice]

Hi Tim!

I didn’t hear anything off audio wise, so still working well there.

I think your tone here is warm and playful.

Looking at the script, I am not sure if this is the kind of tone (warm) a client would go for. With the copy ending with the word “Energize” (with an exclamation mark!), I would say it would be more of an upbeat and energetic read, and not end on a “quiet” note. Does this make sense?

Just my thoughts. Otherwise, it is still a good read!

Kathy