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January 21, 2021 at 11:34 pm
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mkell755
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Hi Katelyn, great job! I prefer the first read more, you sound more authentic to really enjoying the beach and I could picture the beach as well as feel the smile in your voice – really well done! The second read was good as well, so it may just be a personal preference.
Mary