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November 27, 2020 at 11:58 pm
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Hi burdahirl!
Nice read!
Pitch and tone were good. I would recommend a longer pause after “Listen.” … It sounds like it’s part of your second sentence. Emphasizing ALWAYS and MULTIPAX a little more will highlight the brand and product.
Overall, good job!
Kathy