RYoung
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Thanks to the three of you for taking time to listen! Yea this is acting and more difficult for me than a short commercial would be, yet I find it intriguing.
Just wondering if there is a way to notify people that they received a new reply say on a script they posted a few pages back without having to scroll thru pages?
Maybe I’m missing this in my account page but I don’t see it, I know there’s no email notification anymore 🙁
RYoungI am taking a practice script from the library here, trying to relax so much I just let my arms dangle down to give a more realistic read, then bring on the ending with more enthusiasm, any thoughts are appreciated!
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Excellent work on this Andrea! Your voice is calm and reassuring as well! I can only find 2 words that seemed off, one is the word “you” in the first sentence and “run” in
“long run”. Otherwise I think it was pretty spot on and realistic.I like your natural and informative delivery style. I think it would work well in PSAs. Although this is a retail clothing commercial you may want to perk up the ending somewhat with a smile if you know what I mean, good work on this and thanks for sharing!
Not sure if I did this right but was trying to edit my latest script. The newer one is obviously the revised recording due to the first one missing ending of last recording.
Thanks!
