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Welcome Mase!
You did a nice job in this first read!
I agree with previous comments — pace was good; enunciation clear, and to play around with tone and pitch in the beginning of the script.
Kathy
Hi R —
Great read! Your tone and pace fit the script.
I am not sure if you intended to add slight micro-pauses where not written in the script (“muscles the“, “Advil for muscle“), however, it seemed to work for the latter in your second to last sentence.
Kathy
This is great, Robert! I can vision a farm field, or construction site, with this read!
Your pace was good; tone was spot on, and the music fit the script. Nice job writing it, too!
Kathy
Thanks Jonathan! I have never seen a timer on an edit for a personal post before. Thank your for the clarification.
I’ll be reaching out within the next couple of days in regards to a duplicate post.
I like this version of the The Power of True script, RYoung! With the music, it sounds great!
I have a couple of minor suggestions for feedback.
When you say, “Pretty powerful, right?”, trying changing your pitch up with the word “right?”
The last two lines:
Be Bold. Stay True.
This is what we mean by the Power of True.These sound like tags lines, and perhaps insert a longer pause between these lines, and “Pretty powerful, right?”
Just a couple of thoughts. Overall, a nice read!
Kathy
Good job, Sven!
I agree with our fellow VO members that your enthusiasm for the script came through the read, and your voice fits the script well.
My suggestion is to slow down your read just a tad, but not too much, and give more pause between your sentences.
I hope this helps!
Kathy
Hi RYoung!
You have an easy listening style of voice — it was a nice read!
I, too, would echo some other comments here, and be mindful of tone, and upward pitch where not needed.
Kathy
Hi mrtripo9!
You didn’t ruin it! You have that deep tone like James Earl Jones — just with a British accent! I think with a little practice with the enunciation, you have a great voice for promo work!
Good job! I look forward to listening to more of your reads!
Kathy
Hi Colleen!
A nice first read! I know sometimes pace can be hard in the beginning, but you did a really good job with that here.
As for voice memo download — I don’t have experience with a MacBook, but on my iPhone, I recorded on the Voice Record Pro app, not the voice memos on the phone, when starting out, and then emailed it to myself as a MP3 file. I am not sure if this helps at all, but I thought I would mention it.
Overall, good job! Keep it up!
Kathy
