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I am not sure what the issue is, but I tried posting (replying to the forum) my post/mp3 upload about five times Friday night in the feedback forum, and each time I would find it in the reply box at the bottom of the page. I logged out, back in, and that didn’t solve the problem.
I am sure it will post eventually, but I wanted to pass it along.
Thank you.
Hi fleishman619!
These were good reads! I have read these both before. I am drawn to telephony.
Script 1: The tone and pacing were good in this read, although, the last sentence seemed a little rushed with the very last two words. Watch out for adding words in your read, too. Omit “And” in your third sentence, as it is not in the script. Also, since this is for “L.G. Energy”, uptick and emphasis here.
Script 2: The read was clear, and well enunciated, but I would lower your volume with “.com”, and not emphasis that specifically. It’s clear, which is good, but just lower the volume. Does that make sense? To me, I hear this copy with a warmer tone. The pace seemed a tad fast, too. Dial it back a notch, and see how it sounds.
I hope this helps! Keep it up! Look forward to more from you!
Kathy
Hi Tim,
Nice enthusiasm here. Your read was clear, with good enunciation, and varied inflections in tone throughout.
Minor feedback: The first “seafood” seemed a tad dragged out. The second time was better.
Hope this helps!
Kathy
Hi Tim!
I didn’t hear anything off audio wise, so still working well there.
I think your tone here is warm and playful.
Looking at the script, I am not sure if this is the kind of tone (warm) a client would go for. With the copy ending with the word “Energize” (with an exclamation mark!), I would say it would be more of an upbeat and energetic read, and not end on a “quiet” note. Does this make sense?
Just my thoughts. Otherwise, it is still a good read!
Kathy
Hi Robert!
Volume, check! Yay! Again, your voice suits these scripts well, and you do a great job emphasizing important words!
I understand the kind of delivery you are going for. Keep it up! Good read!
Kathy
It’s all coming together, Mary!
I felt like this was the best script you have connected with so far. It flowed well, and you sounded more natural throughout the script.
One suggestion: Perhaps flip the emphasis from “Today’s bank.” to “FIRST STATE BANK”., since this is the product you are selling.
Good job! Keep it up!
Kathy
Great delivery, Robert! Your voice fits these scripts well! Audio feedback: ditto what Mary mentioned!
Kathy
