[David Goldberg]

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[docr15]

Re-posting this since the website update.  This is homework for my Commercial Demo prep.  Thanks for any and all comments!

“The following is a special presentation of ESPN on ABC… home of the Citi BCS National Championship.”

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Re-posting this since the website update.  This is homework for my Commercial Demo prep.  Thanks for any and all comments!

“The following is a special presentation of ESPN on ABC… home of the Citi BCS National Championship.”

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[GJS]

I didn’t have as much of an issue with your “ESPN” OR “ABC,” I think it sounds great! My only suggestion would be one extra beat before “Home of . . . because the who’s presenting it flows great, but the “what?” oh, “Home of the Citi . . . ” etc., I just would have taken the quick extra beat and hit “Home” a little harder. But it’s very, very good as it is.

[isabrandon30]

WOW!  That sounded really good!  I think you did a good job in making the networks stand out. And your pacing was perfect for this type of work!  Good luck with your Demo!

[Tammy]

Please review and provide constructive criticism. Thank you!

County Center Homes
Welcome to a Classic Home Town located in the Center of Prince William County.

Come see how classic hometown living can be part of your modern lifestyle. County Center combines superb amenities with a friendly neighborhood atmosphere, creating a warm and inviting community designed to bring people together. Relax with friends around the swimming pool, enjoy playtime at the tot lots, meet up with friends in the Pocket Parks or on the Village Green. You can also take advantage of the walking and bike paths, tennis and multi-purpose courts, community retail center, farmers market, and even a community amphitheater. County Center. Classic Hometown. Modern Lifestyles.

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[dam1571]

County Center Homes – Really nice voice. Smooth delivery.

[kfvoice]

Lovely voice! A nice warm tone. Crisp and clear. Makes me want to visit! Great job!

[isabrandon30]

I think you chose a great tone for this read.  It really suited the copy well.  Inflections especially towards the end were nice and clear.  Good Job!

[docr15]

Tammy, nice performance for your County Center Homes script!  Great recording quality.  My only comment would be that it seemed to sound rushed, perhaps you edited the spaces between sentences too tightly?  Still, a great-sounding voice!  Nicely done.

[jonathan.anderson]

Hi! Jonathan Anderson, Director of Education at Edge here. Congrats on being the first person to upload to our brand new feedback forum! You may want to try to re-upload your audio file, as we couldn’t get it to play anything.

[SuperLuke]

I enjoyed the performance read of this county center homes presentation

[AndreaC]

I really love the warmth in your voice! Very clear, and you create a sense of honesty and connection that I aspire to! Thank you!

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