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Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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Practicing sounding calmer, more inviting, and retrospective. Mostly just trying to focus on more effectively conveying non-humor emotions in my voice. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
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Things that never get old; enjoying the warm crackle of a fire under a clear sky full of stars. Stepping out of your tent in the morning and taking a deep breath of fresh cool, air. And that first sip of the perfect cup of coffee to start your day. Gevalia Coffee – Discover your perfect cup.
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Continued practice! Working on a more serious PSA than my usual humor filled copy, so any comments focused on performance would be especially appreciated. Thanks!
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<h5 class=”title”>A Philosophy of Life</h5>
<div class=”content”>A man with one watch knows what time it is;
a man with two watches is never quite sure.Don’t look where you fall,
but where you slipped.Look at life through the windshield,
not the rear view mirror.Nothing brings you peace but yourself.
People may doubt what you say
but they will believe what you do.Bee nice to people on your way up
because you’ll need them on your way down.The time you enjoyed wasting
was not wasted.Never explain.
Your friends do not need it
and your enemies will not believe it.While seeking revenge,
dig two graves – one for yourself.Courage is not the lack of fear,
but the ability to act while facing fear.You’ve got to do your own growing
no matter how tall your father was.The best way to predict your future
is to create it.It is better to be hated for what you are
than to be loved for what you are not.Don’t worry about the people in your past
there’s a reason they didn’t make it to your future.Happiness has one advantage over wealth;
no one can borrow it.Everything happens for a reason.
Forgiveness is not something we do for other people
We do it for ourselves-to get well and move on.What’s different in you makes you beautiful.
Contributed by Richurd
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Beringer Wine
Some might choose a lecture or a documentary film to tell the story of 125 years of winemaking. We prefer a glass. At Beringer, we are proud to be the only winery ever to win Wine Spectator’s “Number-1 Wine of the Year” for both a cabernet and a chardonnay. But our greatest achievement lies in knowing that everything we’ve learned is yours to enjoy – each time you pour a glass of our wine. Beringer…All we are in every bottle.
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Only critique I would have would be when saying hundred it comes out a little bit like hunderd. I definitely have that problem a lot. Sounds great!
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Sounds really good! Actually, I would echo Superluke on the “We prefer a glass,” line. Very nice, I’m ready for some Beringer!
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JTLeyba, good afternoon. I really enjoyed the commercial ad for the Caribou coffee. I enjoyed the background music as well. Your beginning was perfect as you gave a convincing “ah coffee, the drink of life” made the audience get the feel for how good coffee is. Very relatable as the commercial read continued. Keep up the great work
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I have two computers. This is my Mac. I was using Audacity when I made this. Feedback is appreciated.
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Great job getting into character! I was worried at first when I heard the voice because I thought it might not be clear; but each word was nice and clear. I really like that breathy quality to the voice initially. Maybe see if you can hold on to it all the way to the last words? Keep doing great things!
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Looking to make a realistic sounding ad spot for my Demo Reel. I’ve been told I have a young sounding voice so maybe college student products might be the way to go for me. Any feedback or constructive criticism is helpful and appreciated.
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Very nice! The casual, conversational feel and subtle humor shines through, and you’re right on track with branding in my opinion- college aged roles would suit your voice well. One note to keep in mind- it came in at around 36 seconds, so if you were submitting for a 30 second commercial you would have to pace it a bit quicker than on your current read. Great job overall though!
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Ok, good recording quality, docr15. I’m glad there’s clear enunciation in your read and that there’s no background noises to distract the audience from your delivery. As a commercial read, it’s very good. I like the “up next” feeling you have in your delivery. As a critique, maybe emphasize more when you say “attack”, “break”, and ” the nation is under siege”, it may add to the audience’s anticipation of, “Oh my goodness, I need to know what happens next on “24”. It’s an opinion.
Great work
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