[SuperLuke]

very good. I would use more of the emotional inflection you use when saying, “we don’t make these, you do”, throughout the ad. It will add more heart to your performance and could potentially help out your performance when making your demo.

[SuperLuke]

Hi all, I have been renovating my home studio. Been getting used to my new tech as well. Anyway, I made a recording of me as Super Mario and a character featured in my demo. Let me know what you think. All feedback welcome!

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Here is the mp3 version of my DJ and dog

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[SuperLuke]

Do my characters sound consistent enough? How’s the performance and recording quality? Using Audacity and my laptop at the moment. Your feedback is important.

[SuperLuke]

Hi Tom, I liked all 3 performances. They seem good for a commercial demo. One suggestion, make the voices a little different from each other snd add more enthusiasm to the performances. It may attract more listeners.

[SuperLuke]

hi mtrip09,
I like how you tried to perform Edgar Allen Poe. It was a good performance. Although, I think you can do better than that.

[SuperLuke]

Good job as far as a biography read. Were you aiming for that in your narration homework?

[SuperLuke]

I like it so far. Good job

[SuperLuke]

KF, I enjoy the performance. Good diction. Speed it up a little bit. I like your first recording better than the second. You sounded calmer and more like a real convincing commercial. Try aiming for 12 seconds, maybe?

[SuperLuke]

Wonderful epic (narrative) poetry!

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