[RYoung]

I liked the Ford Escape delivery, relaxed and realistic sounding. Sounds like some words are not enunciated right? like “dollars”, minor but it can make a difference. The USPS was a little formal, I would smile on delivery of the tag line UNITED STATES POSTAL SERVICE and highlight we deliver with a different tone? Nice work on these!

[RYoung]

Nice work on the narration and storytelling end. I was captivated, my only suggestion would be Dracula’s voice could have a different tone (scary) and maybe a pause in anticipation before Dracula speaks?

[RYoung]

A recent script recorded for an audition I did. Comments, critiques welcome!

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[RYoung]

Art, I like your accent, Eastern European ? The resonant quality of your voice is authoritative, clear and to the point. It does however sound as though your not feeling the emotion of the script? I struggle with this mightily as well, maybe try to relax and not worry about pronunciation so much but more of a dialogue between two people ie; add questions to the script you can read between sentences so as to give a more realistic delivery, hope that helps!

[RYoung]

Thank you both for the critiques!

[RYoung]

Excellent work on Vangaurd piece!

[RYoung]

I submitted this audition sans music recently, Comments or critiques greatly appreciated!

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[RYoung]

Great job on these Chris, note your emphasis tells me important words or phrases to pay attention to, and you have nice voice!

[RYoung]

Thanks for your inputs all, much appreciated!

[RYoung]

Hi, I would move toward a more connected delivery, it seemed a little disconnected? Your voice is very smooth though, you may want to change inflections,(up and down), a bit to sound more conversational, good job on this, keep it up!

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