[Roman Saienni]

Hi everyone,
Here are a few scripts I’ve been working on this week.
Thanks for your feedback.

Roman

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[Roman Saienni]

Thanks so much! I appreciate your comments.

Best,
Roman

[Roman Saienni]

Sorry everyone… i’m reposting the files.
I just noticed that settings were off and my levels were low.
thanks again for listening,
Roman

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[Roman Saienni]

Happy Tuesday everyone…
Here a couple scripts I’ve been working on for homework.
I’d appreciate your critiques. Thanks for listening.

Roman

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[Roman Saienni]

Hey Max,
I really liked both reads. Especially the narration, your voice really lends itself to that style, in this case at least. You demonstrated good versatility with the two very different styles and both sounded great. My main observation is that both reads could flow a bit better. Both felt slightly stilted with pauses between phrases. Other than that, I’d say great job.

Roman

[Roman Saienni]

Thanks so much Max! I truly appreciate your comments.
I agree on your pacing observation, something I’m working on.

Best,
Roman

[Roman Saienni]

Hi everyone,
This is my first post to the Feedback Forum.
I used these two reads in my first coaching session and would really appreciate your feedback.

Thanks!

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