[mkell755]

Hi Kungfu23! I was having trouble understanding all of the words, I think it needs a little crisper enunciation. The third script for Dodge Charger was a little easier to understand all of the words that were spoken. Your tone is nice, I would just slow down the read a little and take time to read each word; some of the words sounded a little smushed together. I hope that helps!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Katelyndawn! I liked the pace and variation of pitch throughout, made it interesting to listen to. Good read!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Jacob! I liked the read and your voice seems well suited for this. It did seem a little rushed in places, like you were trying to get to the end of the read quickly. It might sound too slow to you as you are reading it, but since it is a tutorial, I think a little slower pace with a few more pauses at the end of a thought would work well. It was also very quiet on my end; I had to turn my volume way up to hear it. Good read!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Aprildawn! I liked the read. It sounds like there is a slight hum in the background, but it had a good flow and pace and variation in pitch. Good read!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Svenbot5000! I liked the read. It had a good pace and was catchy, it almost felt like a rhyme by the time the third “litter” was said. It seems like a good type of read for your voice. Good job!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Alexis, thanks for the feedback! I will work on my energy, I like your suggestion to be more excited about telling a friend how great it was. That sounds like somethign I would actually do, if I liked the food a lot. Thanks again!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hey you are welcome Kathy! I feel like I’m beginning to recognize some names with the voices! It’s nice to receive the positive and honest feedback from all, so we can all learn and improve. The forum is great!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Sarah! I listened to the first recording and this recording, and the volume is much better. I like too how your energy and pace were a little more upbeat as well for the second read. Very good read!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Alexis! I liked this read – your voice was warm and the pace was very good. I did not hear background noise on my end, but I also do not have a fully set up studio just yet to potentially hear more of the background. Good read!
Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Touzet! I really liked your take on this commercial – you have a very warm and deep voice, and it seemed well-suited for this type of read when you want the listener to relax. I too am sorry about your friend. I think he would feel honored that you are honoring him.
Mary

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