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Hi Docr15! Very nice read! I like the deep warm tone and good pacing and emphasis on certain words in the read, sounded like a very good fit for your voice. Very good job!
Mary
Hi Kathy! I liked this read. It was warm, well paced and with good micro-pauses between thoughts to let the listener hear and understand what was being said. Good natural tone. Good job!
Mary
Hello everyone! Here is a script for your feedback, any and all feedback is welcome. It’s recorded on my phone, and this is just for practice. I’m going for a natural delivery while still emphasizing the appropriate words. Thank you!
Mary
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Hi Kathy! Good read! I noticed a couple of words that stood out to me – “aspects” sounded somewhat stretched out “aaaspects”, and “integral” sounded like “inteegral” (long e). Otherwise good and clear read with good pacing, tone and pitch. As you have pointed out there are more than one way to pronounce things depending on where you live (I’m from the mid-west), so take that with a grain of salt. Good job!
Mary
Hi Amanda! These were all good reads!
Script 1 – I liked the tone and pace and emphasis on the appropriate words
Script 2 – Great tone and feel for the read, seemed very well suited for you
Script 3 – I liked this read too, but it seemed a little rushed to me. It was a longer script, but sounded like you were reading to get to the end of the script moreso than just explaining steps to someone.
Overall great enunciation and clarity, good job!Mary
You are welcome Kathy! Just my take on things. I don’t have Siri or Alexa either, I’m not a fan of the idea of a robot telling me how to do things; I have probably watched too many sci-fi crazy movies – lol 🙂
Mary
Hello all! Looking for any and all feedback on this script, which was from the Duluth Trading Christmas catalog. This is on my phone, so please know that I will be upgrading to a mic soon. Thank you all!
Mary
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Mary
Hi RYoung! This was a great read for your warm and clear voice. I liked the pace and energy and the appropriate emphasis and enunciation on several key words such as “Wintergreen”. The music too sounded very good and uplifting for this script. There was a slight pause between “…snow-making system” and “not to mention” that might have been treated more like a comma to string together those 2 thoughts. I see that there is a period there and the list of items gets long as a result, but it makes more sense as a comma to me. Great job!
Mary
