Your second piece was much more interesting because you made better use of higher and lower notes in your voice. Your emphasis of particular words sounds good, I would maybe try using more of the full scale of your voice instead of staying just in the middle tones. Great clarity, though!
Great energy and overall clear. I would just pay attention to the T’s and D’s, like in “get it all done” and “ready.” You hit the T on “Geico Direct” really well, so I’d just emphasize a little more.
(This time using MP3 rather than MP4.) New narrator here, and first time doing test recordings! 🙂 Please let me know what you think, I really appreciate your feedback.