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Hello Cecilia!
Great track and great voice! I can distinguish the different styles. I like how the beginning of one style is upbeat, while the other starts more conversational. Both make me excited for ice tea.Hello L.Renee!
Spirit animal is a great script for your voice and it engages the reader. I would suggest maybe slowing it down just a little. Duracell is a great read also with great tone that matches the message, good interpretation.Howdy Markos! Commercial #1 sounds amazing. Very energetic, great transition between sentences, and hitting those buzz words. Commercial #2 sounds great as well. I thought you may have loss a little breath during the second sentence.
Hi Shmuel, thank you very much for this feedback. I’m taking notes and will make improvements. The activities are rafting not rapping.
HEllo everyone! Narration homework – Could you provide specific feedback on the script below? Does my read sound conversational, does the script match my voice? how is my diction.
Hello! You have a warm calm voice that I enjoyed. the tone was great for all 3. for the first script, the beginning seemed a little choppy and could come together more; the 2nd and 3rd scripts I would slow down the pace just a little and really embrace the copy. I think everything else sound good.
Hello everyone! I am working on narration script homework. Could you provide specific feedback on the script below? Does my read sound conversational, does the script match my voice? how is my diction. Thank you for your time.
Starlings
It’s a mesmerizing sight: Thousands of birds move in unison through the evening sky, whirling and swooping as if performing a highly synchronized ballet. When they finally descend to their treetop roost, the beating of their iridescent wings creates such a rush of sound that the noise earned the phenomenon its unusual name: a murmuration of starlings.
