madtrammell

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #79972
    madtrammell
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    Great job! My only advice would be to slow your pace just a tad bit, even though its a shorter read try to take your time with it

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79711
    madtrammell
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    Hello everyone, hope you are all having a great week! I have another practice read for narration that I would love some feedback on, thank you!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79695
    madtrammell
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    Very well done! Only feedback I have is, you might try adding a bit more energy throughout your Lego read to give it a little more “life”

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79694
    madtrammell
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    Great work! I enjoyed your Advantech read, good pacing and diction.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79367
    madtrammell
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    Hello everyone, hope you are all having a great and productive start to the week! I have another attempt at narration in preparation for my demo record, and would greatly appreciate any feedback! Thank you!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79339
    madtrammell
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    You have a very pleasant speaking voice and good pacing. One thing you might try is “lifting” the subject of your read to give it more life

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79334
    madtrammell
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    You have a great voice and I really like the energy you brought to this read! The only note I would make is that the pace seemed just a tad quick.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79064
    madtrammell
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    I liked this read, you have a great voice!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78990
    madtrammell
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    Hello everyone, hope you are all having a great and productive start to the week! I am looking to get some feedback on my second practice read for narration as I am preparing to record my first official narration demo in a few weeks.

    Thank you!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78989
    madtrammell
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    I enjoyed number 1, I feel that for this type of read the over the top performance is more appropriate.

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