[kfvoice]

Thank you for the suggestion — I would like to find a niche that works for me!

[kfvoice]

Thanks for the feedback and tip!

[kfvoice]

How ironic, we both had American Express on our minds tonight!

I can hear less self noise here, as well. Am I hearing some slight micro-pauses in your last line?

[kfvoice]

Hello all! Here’s a telephony read as part of my narration homework.

Again, I don’t have any recording equipment (yet), and this was recorded on a mobile app.

American Express

Thank you for holding. Did you know that you can now receive your American Express statement completely online? No more paper bills! We’ll even send you an email reminder when your statement is ready for viewing. To see if you can take advantage of this free service; log on to americanexpress.com/paperless. Or ask your representative.

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[kfvoice]

Lovely voice! A nice warm tone. Crisp and clear. Makes me want to visit! Great job!

[kfvoice]

Hello! I am new to the field, and am uploading the first reading of my narration assignment. Any and all feedback is welcome!

I decided to read a script for a Web Promo Video under Internet Audio. My recording is under 60 seconds, but appears longer on here.

(Please Note: This audio was recorded in a quiet space on a mobile app. Clicks and pops are evident.)

Web Promo Video

Meet Steve Hudson, owner of Hudson’s Cafe. This year, he opened location number twelve. Business is good… ‘cause the food is good.

But there’s still work to do. See that pick-up and delivery counter? It’s got real potential, but Jessica can’t seem to crack the code.

Jessica handles marketing for Hudson’s Cafe. Her team manages the new web site and the Facebook following. But what she’s about to propose will turn those marketing channels into real business growth. It’s called ChowNow.

ChowNow puts your pick-up and delivery business online with simple, integrated ordering for your web site, your facebook page, and the custom iPhone app ChowNow creates just for you. Welcome to online and mobile ordering, Steve. You’re about to make some money.

Go online and go mobile with…

ChowNow

We can take your orders.

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[kfvoice]

Great reel! You do a vampire character very well! A nice range of character voices!

[kfvoice]

Hi Sarania! Great read! You had a nice flow, and a range in tone.

As for the quality of the recording, I heard some clicks and pops. Can you hear them?

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi there!

I love that you did a script reading for a makeup tutorial! I like the enthusiasm!

There are a couple of things I would be mindful of:

First, in the section, “How do you get it?”, sounds like “How do-ya get it?”

Secondly, I noticed some places where you sound “breathy” in between words. Be careful of micro-pauses, too.

[kfvoice]

Really nice! Sounds great! A warm and calm delivery — that’s how wine makes us feel! Right!?

My only critique is the “gasp” at the beginning of your opening line. Other than that, good job!

[Author]

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