[kfvoice]

Welcome Beckolin!

You have a warm and welcoming voice for voiceover! Your pacing, pitch, clarity, and tone were all very good for this read.

I did not have an issue listening to your file, and I did not notice anything distracting in regards to your audio quality.

I am still learning Audacity myself, and use it mainly for minor edits, but you will gradually get the hang of it.

Very nice first entry!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Good reads overall, with clarity and pacing, and varying your tone in each read.

I felt you connected to the second script the best.

The first script, I agree with others, that there needed to be more enthusiasm. The plosives were a bit distracting in this read, too. Are you using a pop filter? Too close to the mic?

Keep at it!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

mrtripo9 — Great tone throughout the read! Your voice fits this kind of script very well. I ditto what Mary said about the pen tip — it helps!

Keep it up!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Mary!

“Free Swingin’ Flannel” could be a tongue twister! Say that 10 times fast! lol

Caught a few minor micro-pauses, but overall a good job!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Your tone fit the script very well! Nice job on the pacing, and clarity. Keep it up! — Kathy

[kfvoice]

This was a good read, sabpierotti! Good luck!

I agree with Mary about the overall performance of the read. My comments are on the audio/technical end.

I heard a “static” sound between the first and second sentence. It was faint, but I could hear it with my headphones. And the plosive around the :11 mark was a little overpowering compared to the rest of the read. Nothing that a little editing can’t fix.

Looking forward to hearing more!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Nice read! Good pacing, and variation in pitch and tone. The only part that was not clear to me was the name of the school before university. I hope this helps. Overall, a good job!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Katelyn!

This was a good read. Nice job on varying your pitch with the lists! I agree, perhaps try slowing down just a tad, and see how it sounds.

There is a lot to explore with narration, I agree. It is true, anything that you find interesting, or love to do, seems to be easier in connecting to a copy. Your voice would fit this niche within narration nicely.

Keep it up!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi S! Nice read! I could hear the happiness shine through! Good job! Keep it up! — Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi R! Nice read; clear enunciation. Music fits well for the script. It did seem a tad louder in spots to me, and in competition with your voice. I agree with the other comment in that it could be read just a little slower.

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