[kfvoice]

Hello! Nice pacing in both scripts. Good job on varying your pitch, too. In script one “these” was read as “the”.

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Bill!

I really like the tone in your delivery. Of course your voice fits the script, but I like the enthusiasm and cheer for the read. Nice music selection for the time of year, too. My feedback is to perhaps slow the read down a tad, or pause more between sentences. I hope this helps.

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi all!

Here is my narration practice for feedback. It is a script for “Fun Food Hacks” that did not make it onto my list for my demo. All feedback is appreciated and welcome, although I specifically want to know about my pacing here (internet audio for a food video). Thanks again!

Kathy

Fun Food Hacks

Want to make ice cream cookie sandwiches in a snap? It’s easy. Take a pint of your favorite ice cream. Carefully slice through, creating about 1 inch disks. Next take your cookie; place the disk in the middle, and top with another cookie. Find the seam of the carton, and peel away. Press together slightly, and you have a yummy, instant, desert!

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[kfvoice]

Good job, Mary! Overall, a nice natural tone in this read. Keep it up! — Kathy

[kfvoice]

Good job, Mary! Suggestion: try keeping the inflections in your list, but tighten the pauses between words. See how it sounds.

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Everything in this read was good! Enthusiastic tone, clear, with varying pitch. Keep it up!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Nice job! And I agree, kids narration would be a fantastic fit for you!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Thanks, Mary! The second sentence got a little “sloppy” with mouth sounds, so I am afraid it didn’t come out very clear…

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Mary! Good read with nice pacing; varying your pitch. In your second sentence perhaps emphasis “breakfast” instead of “entire”? Minor suggestion.

Kathy

[kfvoice]

I went and picked out of one of my past scripts from a session that will not be making it to my narration demo. I thought this one would be a fun and challenging read to revisit. It is from a longer copy, but I took the first two sentences only, as they alone were a mouthful from the beginning. It took me a little while to be happy for tonight. Let me know your thoughts. I appreciate it all. Thanks, everyone.

Kathy

Explainer-Training

35 mm vs. 50 mm vs 85 mm Lens Comparison for Portrait Photography

In this photography lens tutorial, we will be demonstrating the differences between three fixed focal length lenses: the 35mm, 50mm, and 85mm. These are the three most popular lenses used for portrait photography.

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