[kfvoice]

Thank you, Alex, for the feedback!

I am still learning my interface volume levels and software. I have them at probably 50-60%, and when I am happy with my recording, I listen back on my computer in an mp3 file without my headphones. The computer volume is usually at 60-70%. To me the reading sounds loud enough, but thanks for pointing it out as something to be mindful of.

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Robert!

Hearing you read John Deere is approved by this Green Mountain girl! 🙂

I prefer the second script for it’s pacing. I think the tone and bill-boarding of “That’s how we run.” would make more sense if John Deere was included before it: John Deere. That’s how we run. It would then sound more like a tag line. Otherwise, I don’t think I would raise the volume on this last line. Just my thoughts.

Overall, good job!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Robert, this was a nice read! It’s interesting without your natural Texas accent, but, I’d love to hear it with your natural tone, too! I agree with Mary about the last line, but overall, good job with the pacing before that. It flowed well, and had a natural conversational tone about it.

[kfvoice]

Thank you, Mary! I replied to my own post to edit my script with “desert” (*dessert!) … I really wish the edit button on our original post could be permanent. Thanks again!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

*dessert

[kfvoice]

Thanks, Robert! Unfortunately, I didn’t edit this in time to fix “desert” in the script! LOL … Oy.

[kfvoice]

Nice job on varying your tone on all the scripts! They were all good reads, too.

I am not sure if this helps, but I liked tour (3), food (2), and telephony (1). The food script would work for an in-show narration for a food show, but it might need to be written or read a little differently to not sound so commercially. But, I agree with Beckolin, if you plan to do a commercial demo, this would fit perfectly.

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Beckolin!

This is a really great read! Your voice is suited for trainer narration.

I am not sure if you want audio quality feedback, however, overall, it sounded good to me.

I did hear some very minor noise in the beginning and ending of your recording, but that is something that can be cut out or eliminated with noise reduction.

I think I heard a little “dead” space between sentences (‘sold.’ That’s). I am not sure if you were just really quiet, or you made edits in the script, but I noticed the sound difference. It was almost unnatural sounding. Maybe it is just me.

I hope this helps!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Kara! I will add to the previous comments, and mention to be mindful of micro pauses mid sentence, not intended in the script. Keep it up!

Kathy

[kfvoice]

Hi Kara! Good read! Try varying your tone more in the lists, and be sure you read the copy as written (Now, there’s a character.).

I hope this helps!

Kathy

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