[Keith Paul]

Hi, on the American express, you started of with one pace and then ended much slower. the beginning part had a very good pace.
I thought the pacing on the Club Med was also very slow, I think you could pick up the pace a bit. I’m thinking this is a 30 second spot. Your recording was 39 secs.
The diction is perfect, your read is very engaging.

[Keith Paul]

Thank you very much for your feedback, I will be working on the MMMM tastes good/on the Whiskey copy, you are absolutely right. Thanks again.

[Keith Paul]

Thank you very much for your feedback, I do understand what you mean by varying my tone. I am going to be working on that.

[Keith Paul]

Thank you very much for your feedback your points are well taken.

[Keith Paul]

If it is critique on how conversational your read sounds, you hit it on the head. The only problem is that your volume is too low.

[Keith Paul]

Hi, the tone you used for this script is right on the money. I think you can speed up the script a lit bit more. but all in all it was a good read. Very conversational and you brought out the meaning of the script.

[Keith Paul]

Hi, the Instagram script, your diction is excellent, the read is very conversational. The timing issues is not so much a problem, as we practice more, it will come into play. Keep up the good work.

[Keith Paul]

Good morning, I listened to both of your recordings, the words are very clear, the scripts are very understandable. I am assuming the fiduciary script is an explainer, You did a great job on that.

[Keith Paul]

Hi, the voices do sound very different, most important to me is that the voices are very engaging. Great Job

[Keith Paul]

Hi everyone, I’m Keith Paul I have just uploaded a couple of recordings. I would very much appreciate, some feedback on them, thank you all very much.

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