[Jeff]

Hey Robert,
I like your voice tone ..I think a little rushed as well..
Noticed your volume changed in the last quarter of read. May want to watch your meter for consistency.
Just trying to be helpful here..
not sure if the funeral music works maybe a bit more life in the read and volume on music via ducking

[Jeff]

Nice Job Christy
I enjoy the lite fry in your voice a few times in the read…The s in things is diffidently lost.
Solid on floor noise ..sounds great

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