[Jaljr]

Gonna be at VO Atlanta in March…anyone else have any experience with them?

[Jaljr]

Hey Talia –

Both are great reads. Advanced tech is better than Sgt Pepper. Your voice works well for that corporate trainer.
On Sgt Pepper…good emotion…maybe a bit more dramatic than necessary, but overall very good.
Look forward to hearing more.

[Jaljr]

Hello, friends –

Here are three lightly edited commercial reads for an upcoming coaching session. I appreciate all comments and feedback.
Thanks

JALJr

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[Jaljr]

Gothic was more conversational than Congaree. Both were interesting.

[Jaljr]

Hey –
Listened through a couple of times. My ears only caught little ticky tacky things. I think it is a really good read. The music is good…maybe mix it in a little earlier. No big deal either way. Great job

[Jaljr]

Listened through a couple of time. Hard to find anything not to like.

[Jaljr]

That was a good read. I had to turn it up to get the music in my ears. Certainly not overpowering. Nice job.

[Jaljr]

Hey, folks –
A couple of lightly edited commercial reads. I value your comments.
Be well…
JALKR

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Hey…
Thanks for the feedback on my reads the other day.
This AIG read was good and conversational. I agree with the earthbul that all of your phrasing seemed to tend upward. Some variation by letting some of the phrasing “roll off” might help the read

[Jaljr]

Hey, folks –

Here are a couple of lightly edited commercial reads for an upcoming coaching session. I welcome your comments and feedback.

JAL

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