[Donnamichelle444]

Nice!!!

[Donnamichelle444]

great voice – be mind of the pausing – I am working on that now

[Donnamichelle444]

Love your choice of Script – try acting it out a bit more – draw by your acting

[Donnamichelle444]

that sounds like some good advice – thanks for sharing

[Donnamichelle444]

I’m Trying to get my diction together – I would also appreciate some thoughts on my timing. if I focus on either too much the other gets lost in the thoughts.

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#79763
Artist7 I assure you I could not detect a diction problem at all. That’s my issue – sounds to me that your hard work is paying off!

[Donnamichelle444]

#79685
I am impressed with the clarity of your voice – GOOD JOB

[Donnamichelle444]

#79685
LikeGlen you’re pretty good with the conversational style. Honestly, it did sound real.

[Donnamichelle444]

#79299
Silver Wit the purina one spot is a great example for me in timing

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#79353
Rise well had great volume and flowed well, though it seemed low in energy.

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