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Hi Talia, the beginning of the Spotify read was chopped off. Maybe take a beat before starting. I really loved the end…conversational and loved the tone of your voice. The Philips read was really nice!

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Jahna Bobolia thank you. I appreciate your feedback.

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Thank you, Keith Paul. I appreciate your feedback!

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Hey Keith. I really liked both of your reads, very conversational. I felt compelled to go out and purchase each item. I would like to suggest that you work on pronunciation of some of the words (ex: Tennessee was hard to understand) .

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Hi Everyone, I am looking for feedback on two narration scripts. The first is a Real Estate Home Tour. I am attempting to sell a prospective buyer on this wonderful home. How do I sound? Am I convincing? How is my pace? Am I descriptive in my attempt to sell you! The second script is a narration piece about a badger family in Yellowstone Park. My visual is that I am narrating a documentary on Yellowstone Park. How do I sound? I would love some constructive criticism on this one. Thanks in advance.

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Hi Jahna. I love your voice…very easy to listen to. Your pace is great. My only critique would be that (as a long time Tylenol user) I would like you to really sell me on Advil.

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Your read of the Lego script was very nice! Great energy, nice pace, you were a mom and you sold me on Legos!

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Hey there! I thought both were good reads. Very nice, kept my attention.

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Hi Scott, both are very clear with great pronunciation. I would like to recommend slowing down a bit on each.

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Hi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.

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