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Hi Everyone, I am looking for feedback on two narration scripts. The first is a Real Estate Home Tour. I am attempting to sell a prospective buyer on this wonderful home. How do I sound? Am I convincing? How is my pace? Am I descriptive in my attempt to sell you! The second script is a narration piece about a badger family in Yellowstone Park. My visual is that I am narrating a documentary on Yellowstone Park. How do I sound? I would love some constructive criticism on this one. Thanks in advance.
Hi Jahna. I love your voice…very easy to listen to. Your pace is great. My only critique would be that (as a long time Tylenol user) I would like you to really sell me on Advil.
Your read of the Lego script was very nice! Great energy, nice pace, you were a mom and you sold me on Legos!
Hi Scott, both are very clear with great pronunciation. I would like to recommend slowing down a bit on each.
Hi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.
Hi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.
Hey everyone. Embarrassed….this is my 3rd attempt at uploading my files. Fingers crossed! As part of my training, I would appreciate all feedback. Do I sound conversational? How is my speed, diction, etc. Thanks in advance.
Hoping I’m able to upload this time! I have just started my journey into narration voice over training. I would appreciate your feedback on my first couple of reads. One is for a travel planning video. The other is an audio voice over for a museum tour. I would love some feedback please. I am working on sounding conversational, slowing my pace and sounding natural vs choppy. Thanks in advance.
Hi there. I have made a couple of attempts at uploading for feedback. My first attempt….received format error. My second attempt (mp3 format) also received a format error. Anyone have a solution for this? I don’t want to attempt a 3rd post without some guidance since I am not able to delete my posts.
