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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #69883
    DAYLIGHTVO
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    Thank you for the feedback! I kinda noticed it too lol I will keep this critique in mind. Isn’t it funny how you can always hear a smile? Thank you.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69811
    DAYLIGHTVO
    Participant

    Hello Everyone!
    Looking for some specific feedback on these uploads. I’m working on word clarification/diction of key words in the script, vocal inflection and pitch/tone. All feedback is of course always welcome. I am going through some of the uploads here and for the most part you all are sounding great. I’ll be dropping some feedback on some recent uploads myself.

    Many Thanks,
    Ndehru

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #66963
    DAYLIGHTVO
    Participant

    Hey everyone! This forum has really been great in developing my skills in VO along with my coaching. I am uploading two new spots and would like to hear what feedback I get before the next session- maybe I could tweak it before. Thanks in advance.
    -N.Roberts

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #63108
    DAYLIGHTVO
    Participant

    Re-Uploaded these spots here.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #63105
    DAYLIGHTVO
    Participant

    Hello everyone! I’ve uploaded two spots here, one of which I created the original copy. It was really interesting to begin placing technique and body motion into the read in order to get an authentic recording. Let me know what you think, am I on the right track?

    Thank you
    -Ndehru

    Words. They can do anything.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #60460
    DAYLIGHTVO
    Participant

    Hello All and Happy Holidays!
    I’ve uploaded two practice commercial spots here for review. Honesty and constructive criticism are welcome as I excercise new technique. Thank you.
    -Ndehru

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