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Thank you for the feedback! I kinda noticed it too lol I will keep this critique in mind. Isn’t it funny how you can always hear a smile? Thank you.

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Hello Everyone!
Looking for some specific feedback on these uploads. I’m working on word clarification/diction of key words in the script, vocal inflection and pitch/tone. All feedback is of course always welcome. I am going through some of the uploads here and for the most part you all are sounding great. I’ll be dropping some feedback on some recent uploads myself.

Many Thanks,
Ndehru

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Hey everyone! This forum has really been great in developing my skills in VO along with my coaching. I am uploading two new spots and would like to hear what feedback I get before the next session- maybe I could tweak it before. Thanks in advance.
-N.Roberts

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Re-Uploaded these spots here.

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Hello everyone! I’ve uploaded two spots here, one of which I created the original copy. It was really interesting to begin placing technique and body motion into the read in order to get an authentic recording. Let me know what you think, am I on the right track?

Thank you
-Ndehru

Words. They can do anything.

1 Words. They can do anything. They can call in a dog at night. They
2 can bring comfort to an old friend. They can say happy birthday to a
3 girl whose balloons are slowly sinking. But sometimes, words can
4 get you into trouble. Like the human rights activist who was
5 kidnapped for standing up to Government corruption. Or the
6 journalist sentenced to 10 years in prison for sending an email. Or
7 the thousands of men and women who are arrested and tortured
8 just for demanding fair election. Now we need your words, to
9 demand justice; to take a stand. To offer hope, to people around the
10 world, who are silenced for simply speaking their minds. Write a
11 letter or speak out today. Your words can lead to their freedom.
12 Words. They can do anything.

American Health Imaging: Safe Imaging

1 Need Medical Imaging? There’s no need to wait for an MRI, CT or
2 Ultrasound. American Health Imaging is a safe and smart
3 alternative to hospitals. Our clean and safe free standing
4 facilities offer high quality imaging at 75 percent less. All
5 customers are screened for signs of illness and our staff are
6 always wearing masks and other protective equipment.
7 You can also safely check in from your car. Our touch less
8 experience goes above and beyond CDC guidelines. All high-touch
9 surfaces are sanitized after each patient and our centers are
10 disinfected every night. Our one of a kind Concierge Experience
11 guides you through every step of your visit. American Health
12 Imaging, Now More Than Ever.

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Hello All and Happy Holidays!
I’ve uploaded two practice commercial spots here for review. Honesty and constructive criticism are welcome as I excercise new technique. Thank you.
-Ndehru

BUDWEISER ZERO ‘ZERO COMPROMISE’
INTRODUCING BUDWEISER ZERO. ZERO PERCENT ALCOHOL, ZERO GRAMS OF 
SUGAR,
FULL BUDWEISER FLAVOR. FOR ALL THE MOMENTS YOU WANT A BEER

AND NEED TO STAY ON YOUR GAME. BUDWEISER ZERO, ZERO COMPROMISE.

HAMPTON TOYOTA (radio commercial)
At HAMPTON TOYOTA, we‘re having a sale that‘ll blow you away! It‘s our annual July
4th birthday extravaganza. Hundreds of cars, trucks, and vans … at unbelievable rock
bottom prices. Shop around. Then come to HAMPTON because we guarantee the lowest
prices. The right car, the right price, the right dealer. HAMPTON TOYOTA … right
where it counts.

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