[d_tonguet]

I would love some feedback on this one. I’m working on sounding conversational rather than presentational, so let me know what you think!

Chewy
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[d_tonguet]

Hey, Looking for some feedback on this commercial read. I know the last half second got cut off. I’m still working on those editing skills.

Burt’s Bee’s
You ask me to define myself? What should I say? I’m complicated. I am complex. I’m a boss. And beautiful. I’m all these things and a million things more. But one thing I am not? I am not synthetic. So why would I use beauty products that are? Introducing new Burt’s Bees Beauty. A full line of natural cosmetics that make you feel your beautiful best because of how they’re made, not in spite of it. Burt’s Bees.

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