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Hi Logan,

I think it sounds really nice! Your voice is well suited for this kind of commercial, I think! In addition to the other feedback you received, there were some points where you were trying to emphasize a certain word, but I think you ended up forcing the word out with too much air. For example, “HARMony” and “COst” come to mind. But still, great read!

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I actually have two more!

Motel 6
Whether you live for a good ride or ride to live a little more. Everyone can agree on Motel 6 where you always save more for whatever you travel for. Like the open road.
Book online at motel6.com.

Purina
When you have a pet…life is better, because pets enrich our lives in immeasurable ways, Purina shares your passion for pets, it’s why we continue to do all we can to help pet owners make the world a better place for pets. Purina, your pet, our passion.

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Hi everyone — here are some reads that I completed! Feedback is welcome 🙂

Go Daddy
This report is brought to you by Go Daddy! Running your own business running you ragged? Go Daddy can help. With memorable domains, website design, online marketing and 24-7 expert advice. You can do it…correction…you can k**l it. Go you. Go Daddy.

Invisalign
Your smile says a lot about you. If you let it. When you’re uncomfortable about your teeth, it’s easy to hold back your smile. Invisalign’s advanced technology now lets you straighten your teeth invisibly – so you can express yourself fully. And because they’re invisible, no one has to know about it. Hundreds of thousands of people already have discovered Invisalign. Maybe it’s time you were one of them.

Ziploc
Only Ziploc brand bags have a unique interlocking zipper to lock in freshness in a way no other bag can. When it comes out this fresh, you know it went in a Ziploc bag.
Ziploc. We’ve got a lock on freshness.

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