These reads were phenomenal 😀
It really felt like I was being sold on the products! It’s like you really believed in the products and your voice shows it.
I was super concerned with the beginning of the dictionary reading, only to realize it was a funny exercise for kids, hahaha. The reading was clear and slow enough for children, I think! I also really like the other recording. Both are well read!
Your reading is clear and precise! I think there could be more variation in the way you read sentences, however. It sounded like it was bordering on a monotone voice. But, I like it so far!