[Artist7]

Thanks for the positive, helpful feedback, latyesemca! Will try to incorporate the good tips during the next read!

[Artist7]

Donnamichelle444 Overall, your read sounded good. Two items to note: In a couple of places (specifically the words “need” and “included”), the “d” sound is dropped from the word endings. You might also want to pick up the pace slightly.

[Artist7]

Thanks for the positive feedback Donnamichelle444-I really appreciate it!

[Artist7]

All the recordings sound very professional. Your delivery is very engaging on each one of the recordings. In addition, you have a good, diverse range with your voices, which I think makes you very marketable.

[Artist7]

I like that your delivery on both were attention-grabbing. Your pitch and tone were also nice.

[Artist7]

Hi, everyone!

These two recordings are my very first home work submissions to the forum. For these two recordings, I’m specifically looking for feedback regarding whether they sound conversational, and if my diction sounds okay. I’d be super appreciative for feedback around these two points to find out if I “hit both marks.” Thanks so much in advance!

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