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Hello! This is my first post so be kind! I’m just doing some practicing and looking for some honest feedback. I’ve pulled this Lego commercial from the script library. Appreciate any feedback.

“My child has quite an imagination. His teachers say that some day he’ll be doing great things. Right now, he’s already an architect, a designer, an engineer … I think he’s a creative genius … and thanks to Legos, the creative building toy, there’s just no limit to what he can do, LEGOS … the creative diversion that helps develop a child’s potential.”

Thanks,
Amber

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