[mkell755]

Hi Katelyn! Thank you so much for the candid feedback, this is very helpful. I actually have a long list of things I really do love and have been very actively searching sample scripts I can believe in for me and also sound excited. I’m also interested in narration and telephony, and will work towards a narration demo next, but first it’s a commercial demo (one thing at a time, per my coach). This is not harsh at all, so thanks again! I have a coaching session tonight and sharing detailed feedback is really one of the best ways to improve for me. Thank you!!!

Mary