[kfvoice]

This was a good read, sabpierotti! Good luck!

I agree with Mary about the overall performance of the read. My comments are on the audio/technical end.

I heard a “static” sound between the first and second sentence. It was faint, but I could hear it with my headphones. And the plosive around the :11 mark was a little overpowering compared to the rest of the read. Nothing that a little editing can’t fix.

Looking forward to hearing more!

Kathy