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February 13, 2021 at 5:31 pm
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Hey John, Overall I think your intonations are on.
What I’d work on is pacing. Give each line more room to breathe. Truly feel what you’re describing, see it in your mind’s eye.Really give the punctuation its due.
Keep on this! You’ve got it!