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December 11, 2020 at 5:27 am
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It’s all coming together, Mary!
I felt like this was the best script you have connected with so far. It flowed well, and you sounded more natural throughout the script.
One suggestion: Perhaps flip the emphasis from “Today’s bank.” to “FIRST STATE BANK”., since this is the product you are selling.
Good job! Keep it up!
Kathy