[Elvie]

Hi, The volume on the first one is lower than the second. You sound friendly and your pace is good. I like the second one, maybe because I can hear it better. Great job on both!

[Elvie]

Hello Ryoung, Great job! I love the music in the background. I think it would help if you pace yourself a little slower in your read. At times it felt to rush but other than that you did Awesome!

[Elvie]

Nice job Tom! You sure sound friendly, warm and trust worthy handyman. So clear, great recording.

[Elvie]

Hello, This is for the Self Direction and Cold Read class with David Goldberg on Tuesday February 9th, 16th, & 23rd. I am to submit and get feed back before my class at 5pm PST.

Please I welcome feedback. Thank you!

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