[Steve Z-A]

Your enunciation is very good. Easy to understand. I feel your pace could be a bit faster (a problem I am also working on) and I would also suggest you pick a few key words throughout the text to emphasize with your voice.

[Steve Z-A]

Hi friends- Hope you are having a great holiday season. I am posting here a few narration samples I would welcome feedback on. Specifically wondering about the pacing and tone of these. I know the recording quality sounds like it was done on a phone,,,because it was. Thanks in advance for any comments. Steve

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Thanks for listening and the comment.

[Steve Z-A]

These are both great Lauryn. Good inflection made them interesting to listen to, and I would say they have the appropriate energy for the subjects.

[Steve Z-A]

This is great! It sounds like a commercial Caldwell-Banker would be glad to use.

[Steve Z-A]

Hi folks. Pretty new to all this but very appreciative of any feedback. Wondering especially about my pacing, and if the tone seems appropriate, but all comments are welcome!

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Hi Folks- This is my first time posting recordings and I look forward to working with you all. Thanks in advance for any feedback you might have. I am working in the narration genre and with these pieces I am wondering about my pace, and also the “conversational” vs “narrative” dilemma with my presentation. Thanks!

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