[Steve Z-A]

Thanks so much. Very helpful.

[Steve Z-A]

Hi folks. I am enjoying hearing all of your work and would appreciate any feedback on these few commercial reads from the library. Done on a phone so I know the recording quality is not great, but comments in any other direction would be great! Thanks!

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[Steve Z-A]

You have a great voice and I like your accent as well. Good diction, pace and style. There were a couple of words I would have liked to hear in full rather than shortened..like hearing “competing” rather than “competin'”

[Steve Z-A]

Nice commercial reads. Good pace and enunciation.

[Steve Z-A]

I liked your tone and enthusiasm in this. The pace is good and excellent clarity. My only thought was that in a couple of spots I thought you inflected up with your voice, where I expected more of a downward choice. Good work.

[Steve Z-A]

I liked both of these reads. You have good clarity and pace and I thought you did a good job emphasizing key words throughout both.

[Steve Z-A]

Thanks so much for the feedback.

[Steve Z-A]

Nice reads. Well enunciated and good flow. I found I was wanting the first two to be read a bit faster, with shorter pauses between phrases. Not sure if others would agree with that. I liked the pace of the third one, however.

[Steve Z-A]

I liked both of these. Tone is good and I would say mostly conversational. Technically they were good to listen to. In the Pets piece I might suggest reading the list towards the end a bit faster, with fewer pauses between each word.

[Steve Z-A]

I really liked both of these reads. The Adventure Academy in particular kept me wanting to hear more with your voice and emphasis on key words.

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