[Wes@1972]

Hey guys, just posting my homework! An area of improvement for me has been editing, so I’m hoping it sounds great! Any feedback is welcome! Thanks, Wes

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Thank you for the constructive feedback! One area I need to work on is my editing and breathing, so definitely very helpful.

[Wes@1972]

Hi Ilene, thank you so much for your feedback! It’s very useful as I prepare for my upcoming narration demo.

[Wes@1972]

And 3rd a scripture narration. One of my issues has been tempo and pacing, so I’m working hard to correct that!

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This is my second VO post and is a biographical narration.

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[Wes@1972]

Hi this is Wes! I’ve been out of the loop for a while. This is my first attempt at VO narration scripts.
This is 1 of 3 homework scripts. I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks!

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Eddie Bauer
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Nice job with the editing! Good differentiation in tone throughout reads.

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