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Trying to get into a regular practice routine.
Ran these scripts last week, and just got around to setting them up for posting.It’s been a while, so…..
Hazaro, the last one (Atlanta Bread Company) was awesome..! The others were good, but may be pushing the giddiness just a bit. But that’s a good thing! It means that you can pull it back just a bit and nail it. I think the Suave take was probably next best, but there were a couple of phrases that didn’t quite land right. A good set though. Quite entertaining..!
This was so good. Just a bit fast in a couple of places and the words kinda dropped on each other. But you nailed the feel!
Can’t wait to hear you in a real studio with a better audio chain.A good read. Might want just a little more something on the comedic lines, make them stand out just a bit.
Nice work…!Nice read. I have to focus to get past the sound quality, but when I do, the delivery seems really inline with the script. However, you may want to check the name of the product. You said ‘Eucerin’ instead of ‘Excedrin’. Other than that, well done.
Kyle,
A couple of things: might want to check your levels. It came across really light in volume, but the audio was really clean. Also, feel free to edit out the outtakes.
As for the read, the last ‘take’ was certainly the best. It starts out with a lot more energy and confidence, but needs to keep that energy up.
IMHO, your voice is really good for this kind of delivery. There is a bit of an edge, and a resonance, that can make it really smooth. Nice work. Look forward to more….!
TimG
Erik,
Awesome job overall. I think it could be a bit smoother. And the hyphen between ‘average’ and ‘before’ probably should be treated like a comma, or a place for a pitch change instead of a break in the flow.
And your audio is really good…!! Wish I had a space that sounded like that…!!
TimG
Nicely done, Courtney….! Two totally different kinds of reads and I think you really rendered them both well. The almost child-like Disney script and a more smooth, mature McDonalds script. Well played…!!
TimG
Logan,
Gotta agree with 1stassi, really need to relax a lot more. Let the words kinda flow from one to the next. Some word sequences won’t lend themselves to that, but a lot will. So don’t be afraid to string some of the words together, and really get a smooth feel going.
Also, a bit more pitch variation might be useful. It’s really easy to think you are varying your pitch a lot when it comes out kinda monotone. I know I do that with enunciation. Just when I think I am being almost clownishly over the top, it actually turns out pretty good. Just try to push it once and if it’s too much, pull it back a bit till it sounds just right.
And … your studio sounds Great…!!
TimG
Hey gang…!
Doing a little practice these days. Since it has been a while, thought I would see how you think I am doing.
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