[waninick]

Nice read..! The pace and phrasing are really spot on. And they both have a nice one-on-one feel.
Smooth where it can be, and edgy where it needs to be.
Impressive…!

-TimG

[waninick]

Hey Gang…! Been a bit, but looking forward to interacting a lot more in the coming weeks.
This is a recording I put together today from the script library. I know the room sound is not what it should, or will, be, but looking more for a review of the delivery.

Thanks for your time.

TimG

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[waninick]

Hazaro, Thanks much for the response. Guess I have to pay more attention to the big words…! Thanks for the reminder.

Wani was our cat that we lost many years ago. We have yet to bring ourselves to find another one. He was just the best cat, and I use that image for avatars all the time.

Thanks again..!!

[waninick]

Trying to get into a regular practice routine.
Ran these scripts last week, and just got around to setting them up for posting.

It’s been a while, so…..

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[waninick]

Hazaro, the last one (Atlanta Bread Company) was awesome..! The others were good, but may be pushing the giddiness just a bit. But that’s a good thing! It means that you can pull it back just a bit and nail it. I think the Suave take was probably next best, but there were a couple of phrases that didn’t quite land right. A good set though. Quite entertaining..!

[waninick]

This was so good. Just a bit fast in a couple of places and the words kinda dropped on each other. But you nailed the feel!
Can’t wait to hear you in a real studio with a better audio chain.

[waninick]

A good read. Might want just a little more something on the comedic lines, make them stand out just a bit.
Nice work…!

[waninick]

Nice read. I have to focus to get past the sound quality, but when I do, the delivery seems really inline with the script. However, you may want to check the name of the product. You said ‘Eucerin’ instead of ‘Excedrin’. Other than that, well done.

[waninick]

Kyle,

A couple of things: might want to check your levels. It came across really light in volume, but the audio was really clean. Also, feel free to edit out the outtakes.

As for the read, the last ‘take’ was certainly the best. It starts out with a lot more energy and confidence, but needs to keep that energy up.

IMHO, your voice is really good for this kind of delivery. There is a bit of an edge, and a resonance, that can make it really smooth. Nice work. Look forward to more….!

TimG

[waninick]

Erik,

Awesome job overall. I think it could be a bit smoother. And the hyphen between ‘average’ and ‘before’ probably should be treated like a comma, or a place for a pitch change instead of a break in the flow.

And your audio is really good…!! Wish I had a space that sounded like that…!!

TimG

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