[twiegers]

Hi yall!

I have attached 3 files and am hoping to get feedback on what I can improve. Not looking for technical feedback, thanks!

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[twiegers]

Hey ya’ll!

Please let me know how you feel about these. Feedback is much appreciated!

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[twiegers]

Hi everyone!

I would love to get some feedback from you all. Below are the scripts I’ve created with files attached. I know there are some technical difficulties this time around, but I would love feedback more focused on the acting and connection with the script. Let me know what you all think. I’d really appreciate it!

Lucky Plus Dog – harnesses for dogs

Handmade dog gear made in small batches. Try our new no-pull harness for your pet. It has adjustable size, a durable nylon buckle, and mesh lining for easy breathing.

Strayer University

At Strayer University, we strive for you to get an affordable education that fits your busy schedule. We are designed for the way you live. With our online learning program, you can begin your degree with a new laptop preloaded with Microsoft software. Attend classes from anywhere. Begin your degree today.

Patagonia Austin- outdoor clothing store

This is Austin, TX. Mostly every day. Nothing but sunshine. Every. Single. Day. Patagonia Austin has a great selection of gear for climbing, trail running, mountain biking, travel, and the day to day.

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[twiegers]

Hello! The thing that stuck out to me most was the overall pace. Due to the fast pace, a few words were slurred. I love the informative tone you used!

[twiegers]

Hello all! Here are some practice scripts for a couple of commercials. I’d appreciate any feedback, thanks!

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