TimberTykes

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #70673
    TimberTykes
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    Good Afternoon!

    Uploading a couple more of my recordings in hopes of feedback and critique.

    Thank you for your time! It is much appreciated.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #70430
    TimberTykes
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    Thank you for your feedback!

    Yes, you’re right in regards to both recordings. I was so focused on hitting the targeted time that I forgot about actually letting the script (or, myself) breathe. Next time I’ll relax a bit more.

    As for the 2nd one, I will definitely take your advice to heart. I must’ve lost focus to what the commercial was aimed at.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #70365
    TimberTykes
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    Good Morning/Evening!

    I am replying to the forum thread here for homework purposes, from my instructor.

    It is here that I post a couple of recordings. No specific ‘themes’ with this one, just advertisement commercials.

    Feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated! I’m more than eager to learn, so criticize me where it hurts, lol.

    (Hopefully I did a decent job in hiding the fan; it’s a hot night/day, and thus makes my studio hotter…)

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