TimberTykes
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Hello!
These were great takes, and you have very nice and clear voice! Your diction was clear and well-pronounced.
If I had anything to say regarding flow, it’d be to make sure you’re enhancing your words, and adding variation where it matters. I can’t really tell what the product is and its properties (at first listen) without a little enhancement, telling me what it is. I hope that makes sense!
I want to say thay you have a great voice! Especially for this read. If I had any feedback, I think you could work on the enhancement of your words between commas, and as for the opening line to this script, I felt like there was hesitation when asking the question, leaving the line feeling a little awkward. Other than that, a great read!
Good Evening!
More recordings as homework via instructor. I’m being a bit more dexterous, and trying to ease my anxiety, so I’m posting two this time.
In both recordings, my main focus were making sure I’m leaving little space in between lines, as I tend to pause a lot, subconsciously. Hopefully I’m conveying my conversation with less restriction in my performance. Also, since I’m loosening up, I want to make sure I’m keeping track of my beginning/middle/end of the script.
Criticism and critiques of any kind are very much welcome. Thank you for your time!
Hello! Thanks for your recordings! You have a very clear, and well- pronounced voice- no hesitation at all. It was really great to listen to!
If I had any particular feedback, it’s actually the reading of your script. They were read in a straightforward manner, with little in the way of fluctuation to certain lines, or emphasis to certain words I feel would really send the message of the recording home.
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I have with me another recording, as homework per my instructor.
Hopefully the sound quality is okay- I’m not sure what’s going on tonight, but it seemed like there was a tremor while recording, no matter what I did. Also, the beginning was mistakenly cut off… but I really like this take, and didn’t want to get rid of it, so…
This was initially a gameplay trailer, but I think the on-screen scripty worked well enough to warrant a recording. Once again, I need to make sure I’m exhibiting a feeling of conversation, as well as elements of a beginning/middle/end, so hopefully you can feel that here.
I’m a little embarrassed, given the context, but my instructor recommends me find scripts of things I really like. Feedback and criticism of any kind is much appreciated!
Hey, and thanks for the reply!
Yeah, for some reason, I have a penchant for ‘honoring the script.’ I tend to forget afrer it’s too late, but I definitely won’t forget next time. Thanks again!
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I’ve got a couple of readings as homework, per my Instructor.
Feedback would be most appreciated. I’m trying to make sure I’m leaving the impression of talking to someone, and also making sure that my words are being pronounced clearly.
Thank you for your time.
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I have a couple of recordings here for homework- two commercial readings.
My main focus was making sure the reading was akin to a short story- I have to make sure my readings had a beginning, middle, and end. Any feedback is much appreciated, and thank you for your time!
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Disney Princess Pop-Up Games: I think you did a pretty good job here! Your voice has a dreamlike, fairytale-narrator quality that definitely matches well with the subject. This could just be me however, but I feel that your pacing is a little slow? On one hand I feel it’s intentional, but on another I do feel that there were times where I thought some lines should definitely pick up a little speed.
Sesame Place Theme Park: A great job here! You’ve got great energy, and I can totally understand the elevations you’ve given to words in your script. Near-impeccable delivery. A minor nitpick, but I think I would’ve said ‘Oscar’s Wacky Taxi(TM)’ a bit differently in an attempt to offset between that and ‘New in 2018… most exciting roller coaster ever,’ or vice versa. But still, great work!
