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Commercial Demo practice scripts from Edge Library

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Practice Scripts – Commercial

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Practice Reads – Commercial

Apple (1997)
McGraw-Hill Co.

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Practice Read – Cafe Vienna Coffee Commercial
Practice Read – Lender’s Bagels Commercial

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Hello! I will potentially be using these for my first demo. Any feedback is appreciated!

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Hello, please let me know what you all think about these practice scripts.

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On the second one (Old Navy) despite how excited you sounded I felt like you were still holding back on your excitement. I have this same problem big time. Try letting all the excitement out! 🙂

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I would’ve tried to sound a bit more enthusiastic, but I get it social security isn’t the most exciting thing in the world 🙂 Other than that I thought a couple of words weren’t quite pronunciated entirely like “because Social Security”. Very nice!

[ThomasGreene]

I think your tone sounds perfect. I did notice that your pitch maybe changed a bit more than it should have like here “weren’t in abundance.Luckily, kids were.” but I’m not 100%.

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