[Teddpr]

Hi Gigi,
You have a nice sounding voice. Your diction and lack of drop outs on the Freshii copy sounded good. For the Bare Minerals copy you could improve differentiating the list of silicone, oil, paraben and fragrance by varying the inflection of the words.

[Teddpr]

The American Cancer Society sounded totally professional. You nailed it. I thought you were a little over the top with your emotion in describing the right side of the brain for the JC Penny commercial.

[Teddpr]

Hi Wes,

You have a nice sounding deep voice. You are still sounding a bit staccato and robotic. Try adding some warmth to your narration.

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